this page is giving me trouble, for several reasons... I don't have much free time today, so the art's more rushed than I like, and I'm still trying to figure out how much I want to add to the existing text... in a comics format, I either make up what people say when the text summerises a conversation, or fill the whole thing up with huge chunks of Jonathan's diary. This is turning out to be an interesting exersise, and, at least, I've kept up with doing one a day... I do like the page, regardless. woo.